~chorus~
You just can't see the paper floating away
while you waiting and playing your little game
you putting that grey money in my hands, see
the world as a dollar bill, now that you mention it
yes my fridge is running away and we just sit there, watch'n,
in anonymous' words; "Bugger off man!"
~chorus~ it's the death of us
you are the enemy, the suits are afraid of ya,
and the government is smoke'n you out then your
cover goes pop! but it don't matter cause you already in
the next town preying on their people,
rubbing vanishing cream on their money
~chorus~
Countries board up their windows because
of you, you play the world like monopoly, ya
I'll take Sweden for $500, the people hate you; now how
does that make you feel sir, CONGRATS, YOU'RE BANKRUPT!
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In my song I feel that I did a good job about including a lot of literary devices in my song, sometimes I felt like some of my literary devices were a little bit off and was doubting my ability. I also did a good job at finding an age appropriate and original topic, because I don't know about you but I've never seen a song about corruption for little kids.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand I saw the chorus very annoying, coming up over and over again because the versus were so short so next time I can and will make them longer.